Comments on: Sample Sunday http://evannelorraine.com/2006/12/sample-sunday/ Dangerously Sexy author blog Fri, 10 Feb 2012 17:05:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Evanne http://evannelorraine.com/2006/12/sample-sunday/comment-page-1/#comment-91 Evanne Tue, 02 Jan 2007 04:38:00 +0000 http://evannelorraine.com/index.php/2006/12/sample-sunday/#comment-91 Hey Sheila,<br /><br />Thanks for stopping :) - I'm leaving this part along for now but that doesn't mean I don't appreciate the feedback - just saving them for later. <br /><br />Evanne Hey Sheila,

Thanks for stopping :) – I’m leaving this part along for now but that doesn’t mean I don’t appreciate the feedback – just saving them for later.

Evanne

]]> By: Anonymous http://evannelorraine.com/2006/12/sample-sunday/comment-page-1/#comment-90 Anonymous Mon, 01 Jan 2007 20:47:00 +0000 http://evannelorraine.com/index.php/2006/12/sample-sunday/#comment-90 I didn't like the last line. where she belonged, naked and under him, makes him unappealing to me.<br /><br />I have only read one Presents, but is him having broken up with his latest girlfriend only a week before too current? I think a month sounds better.<br /><br />I like the set up and look forward to reading the whole story. The rain dripping down her neck really brought me into the story.<br /><br />Sheila I didn’t like the last line. where she belonged, naked and under him, makes him unappealing to me.

I have only read one Presents, but is him having broken up with his latest girlfriend only a week before too current? I think a month sounds better.

I like the set up and look forward to reading the whole story. The rain dripping down her neck really brought me into the story.

Sheila

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