WIP Wednesday
December 3, 2008 | writing craft
Deciding which story to work on next is always a tussle. There are partials on the hard drive, files stuffed with story ideas, and notebooks crammed with story scraps.
I have a plan, but things happen.
Thinking about December blogs and Christmas, led to digging out a Christmas story I wrote several years ago. A little polishing and I decided to serialize the first chapter on the blog as a Christmas present for Dangerously Sexy readers.
The first step in reading or writing is the hook. Unless I’m intrigued, amused, puzzled–something then there’s no point in continuing.
After a little digging, I found it the old partial. And fell in love.
Now, I need to figure out if this is infatuation or the real thing. Because, although I have a forty thousand word partial, eighty percent of it needs serious work and the other ten percent needs some effort.
So, I published part one of the first chapter here starting Tuesday the second, and then I’m going to let all of you help me decide if the story is worth telling.





When both Hunter and Tru bond with Amber their mating triangle threatens everything they hold dear.
Determined to help rescue the princess, Cassandra agrees to act as the dragons’ sex slave, but can she guard her heart from the dominant males?
Camille, a plump, sweet-natured breeder, is caught in New Eden’s endless war with Baldor. Her mates, Jaxon and Aegis, need cunning and courage to rescue her. They need a miracle to capture her heart.
Werewolf-whisper Daniel is the only one who can heal Scarlet’s broken werewolf connection. If he succeeds then the pack’s needs will eclipse his claim on her heart. But if he fails, they'll both die.
A Scarlet Past, the story of Scarlet's parents is available on Amazon or Barnes and Noble for just 99 cents!
A lonely woman finds passion with a dominant much younger lover, when she tries to leave she learns her new master plays for keeps.
The Enyo Chronicles includes both Dalia's Choice and Joon's Tempation.
Three different stories, three dangerous men, and three women who deserve them.
One dangerous warrior woman plus two rogue demon males equals a love to threaten an empire.
Getting paid to watch Eduardo is Desiree’s dream assignment, but when he reaches out to her, crossing the line, everything changes.
Deep in her secret heart, she lusts for a sexy pirate who’d be her master and commander in the bedroom. But, this man may be too dangerous
One woman, two men, three wounded hearts--though already mated their love is still forbidden.
A reluctant reporter and a lone wolf undercover cop work to catch an extortionist, finding love requires the most dangerous risk of all.
Street-smart cop plays princess to catch deadly terrorists. Now,the only man she trusts is the one she can't resist.
What Sam doesn’t know may kill him--the love of his life is his worst nightmare--his enemy’s daughter.r.


December 17th, 2008 at 10:46 am
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